My favorite piece of technology is my cell phone. I got it from two year ago. It was a birthday gift from Javier, my cousin. In general, I use my cell phone all the time, when i walk in the street, when I am in the university, in my home, and...¿why not?...when i am in the english's class (third level). I used it many many time a day, but... I don't know exactly how many times i use my cell phone per hour.
I like my cell phone because it permit me stay in regular contact whit my family, friends, colleagues and others. On the other hand, my cell phone is a perfect for borings moments, because i save a lot of music in it. When i go in the bus or the subway, it is perfect. Finally, my cell phone is a good pent drive. I save many information on it. In few words, if I didn't have my cell phone, my life would be more boring, sad and lonely (hahaha ¿¿really??)
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Your post is fine and it has its share of humour, which is good. Please compare your post with my corrected version.
ReplyDeleteRemember :
a) In English we only use question and quotation marks at the end of the sentences: ex, Are you Okey? / What a drag!
b) I use it = present / I used it = past.
c) Adjectives never add “s”. Ex. A boring film / many boring films
d) Don’t you dare use your mobile phone in the English class!!!!! Or else… he, he ,he…
Friday, April 17, 2009
My Favorite piece of technology
My favorite piece of technology is my cell phone. I got it (-) two yearS ago. It was a birthday gift from Javier, my cousin. In general, I use my cell phone all the time, when I walk in the street, when I am in the university, AT home, and...-why not?, when I am in the English class (third level). I use(-) it many many timeS a day, but... I don't know exactly how many times I use IT per hour.
I like my cell phone because it permitS me TO GET in regular contact / GET/BE/STAY IN TOUCH wITHt my family/, friends, colleagues and others. On the other hand, my cell phone is (-) perfect for boring(-) moments, because I save a lot of music in it. When I go On the bus or the subway, -it is perfect! Finally, my cell phone is a good pen(-) drive SINCE I save A LOT OF information In it. In A few words, if I didn't have my cell phone, my life would be more boring, sad and lonely (hahaha -really??)